"as well" - comma before ?

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Should the comma be added before "as well" ?

See example:

With the right care and perfect male waxing London choice, you can enhance your personality and increase your self confidence as well.
asked Nov 21 '11 at 11:20 Rafal New member

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No - you shouldn't use a comma.

 

If you're writing marketing copy (which it looks like) then I'd suggest you tweak it slightly. People buy results, so put the focus of the sentence on what they'll get if they go with your services.

 

"Enhance your personality and increase your self confidence with the right care and perfect male waxing choice."

 

Then go on to say how convenient your salon is because it's based in ____, just around the corner from _____, etc. You get the idea. 

link comment answered Nov 21 '11 at 15:24 Siân Harris Expert

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