Use of Colon and Comma

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Which is proper expression?  Or should both be corrected?

 

Although the risk might be low, we are still concerned that: another action deprives the defendant of his opportunity to argue the issue, whereby he might argue another severe issue to avoid a judge from giving a decision.

 

Although the risk might be low, we are still concerned that another action deprives the defendant of his opportunity to argue the issue whereby he might argue another severe issue to avoid a judge from giving a decision.

asked Dec 02 '12 at 02:24 Yukio Nakamura New member

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