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       “Who are you?” he asked, “move your hat, and show me your face.”

       “Are you giving me orders? Nobody tells me what to do boy.”

      “I’m sorry, I want to see who you are.”

      “They call me the old watcher. I guard this river, stop people from swimming in it, and walk on the stones. May I ask why are you here?”

      “I want to get across, and find my father’s vault.”

     “I have to forbid you from crossing that river.”

asked Jan 31 '11 at 10:04 Noel Jones New member

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