Does these dialogues sound okay?
“Who are you?” he asked, “move your hat, and show me your face.”
“Are you giving me orders? Nobody tells me what to do boy.”
“I’m sorry, I want to see who you are.”
“They call me the old watcher. I guard this river, stop people from swimming in it, and walk on the stones. May I ask why are you here?”
“I want to get across, and find my father’s vault.”
“I have to forbid you from crossing that river.”
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