Comma for two pronouns

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I am (ghost)writing a farewell letter for an outgoing board member. Which punctuation is correct and why?

 

Looking for the rule online, there is a double article (this, my). The usage itself might be a bit archaic or even ungrammatical, but I'm aiming for a certain voice for this client.

 

a) In this my final letter to members, I want to thank each and every one of you.

 

b) In this, my final letter to members, I want to thank each and every one of you.

 

And of course, I can always rephrase to:

Here, in my final letter to members, I want....

:-) 

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I would use b).

 

 

 

B

link comment answered Feb 16 at 17:42 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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