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Evidence is also presented by Song, Kolb, Lee and Kim (2012) that transformational leadership not only can strengthen employees’ involvement in organisation but boost their creativity which is commonly regarded as an essential point to succeed a business.

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Evidence is also presented by Song, Kolb, Lee and Kim that transformational leadership not only can strengthen employees' involvement in organisation but boost their creativity which is commonly regarded as an essential point to succeed a business.
asked Nov 16 '12 at 19:39 Xiaotong Song New member

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