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The most greatest and affected person, who discovered the electricity, is Newton. He, who was an English physicist, mathematician, and alchemist, was born on 4 january 1643. Life without Newton's inventions and discoverys; you would not have anything such as laptop, car, and any electronic machines. How much our life will be harder without all these machines we use it every day.

asked Nov 14 '12 at 18:19 hasan shehab New member

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hahahah ;P  okay thank you guys

I thought that Newton descovered electricity hahaha. I changed it to this:

The most greatest and affected person of the Renissance, who developed a system of electricity power, was Thomas Edison. He who was an English physicist, and mathematician t was born on November 11, 1947. Life without Thomas Edison's inventions and discoveries; you would not have anything such as laptop, car, and any electronic machines. Imagine how hard our lives would be without electricity we use every day! If Thomas Edison did not discover the electricity which is the most important power for machines, we would not watch television, travel easily by can, or live comfortably life. Also, he invented many physics rules which helped a lot of scientists. Newton was one of the most successful scientists of Renaissance and his invention and divorces affected on our lives way.

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