Can you read my short essay? I am preparing for The TOEFL test


Explain a situation in which you received good advice. Use details to support your answer.

There are a lot of situations were I have  received good advice, but I remember one time when I received advice from my primary doctor. When I was 26 years old, I got pregnant and at that time I was smoking lot cigarettes. When I went to see my doctor, he have told me that I needed to stop smoking or otherwise my baby and I was going to have health problems, so I listened to him. Stop smoking brought me health benefits. As a result, I have more energy, better ability to concentrate, the chance of heart attack has decreases. Like wise, Stop smoking  brought me psychological benefits I am not feeling terrified of the health consequences. No feeling guilty of what I am doing to my body. In conclusion, the doctor advice was very helpful for me.  

asked Nov 10 '12 at 01:16 luz Herrera New member

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