Letter to the University Admission office


Hello? I need your help. I submitted my application to my adorable University. But, I am worrying about my references. They were sent directly admission office. So need to make sure that admission officer know that these references belong to me. I wrote a letter but I feel it is not good enough. Can you revise it for me? Please? Thank you very much for helping millions of people:)
Here is my letter:

Dear Sirs/Madams Good Morning? I, Deegii , registration number 99999, am willing to pursue my Masters in Finance at prestigious XYZ. I have only eyes for accepting XYZ and worrying about if my reference letter handed in right time and accompany my application. Two of my previous professors provided me a reference letter and sent them directly to XYZ Admission office. I have just realized that there is a possibility for my references could not state my name clearly. Therefore, I would like to make sure if my references were accompany my application. One of my references was sent by Mr. X, President of  UB Toastmaster International, and a lecturer of LLL. The other one was sent by Mrs. Y, a lecturer at LLL Is it possible for you to check if my references considered for me? I am looking forward hearing from you. Thank you very much for your time. Best Regards, Deegii 

edited Oct 18 '12 at 08:46 Delgermaa New member

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