Review this sentence for pronoun usage
I got the message "Review this sentence for pronoun usage" refer to sentence below.
One wet a raining winter night just as they were home from a date night together, to celebrate her birthday.
How could I fix the issue?
This is either the conclusion or first part of a longer sentence. For example:
One wet winter night, just as they got home from a date to celebrate her birthday, the rest of the sentence happpened.
You don't need to mention the rain – one wet winter night already says rain. (Excellent use of the W sound, by the way – what about windy?)
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