Can someone revise this sentence?
I would like to improve these sentence to make it sound more professional.
"Those who have previous experience with an individual with a psychological disorder."
I feel that "with an individual with" could be improved.
Also, I rather not use the word "suffering from" because this is an essay on stigma.
Thank you in advance.
Eduardo, you can magically transform this clause by simply changing the first with to of.
Those who have previous experience of an individual with a psychological disorder . . . etc.
Going a stage further, you might also consider pluralizing thus:
Those who have previous experience of individuals with a psychological disorder . . . etc.
It was the with-with factor causing the niggling feeling.
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