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  This is to inform everyone that majority of the employees agreed to celebrate our Christmas Party on December 17, 2012, Monday which will be held at 7th floor of “K” Line Building. The Committee opined that it will be good to celebrate our party together with our family. In this connection, we are glad to advise everyone that each employee is entitled to bring their family members especially their kids to celebrate with us this pleasure and gathered as one big family. There are a lot of surprises, games and prizes being planned by the Committee to ensure that everybody will enjoy the said event. For the married employee you can bring maximum of two (2) immediate family members, and for single employee you can bring at least one (1) companion. In this regard, please write the name and age of the family member or companion you want to bring so that we can utilize and confirm the number of person to be included for the food catering reservation. In addition, we would like to inform everybody that we will be asked each department for an intermission number that will highlight the said party. Great prizes are to be given away for those departments who will perform the most awesome presentation. Thank you.  

asked Sep 27 '12 at 02:03 Gharie Gavino New member

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Majority of the employees agreed to celebrate the Christmas party on Monday, December 17, 2012   which will be held on the 7th floor of “K” Line Building. The Committee desires that it will be good to celebrate the party together with our family. We are glad to inform you that all employees are allowed to bring along their family  to celebrate this happy occasion.

link comment answered Sep 27 '12 at 05:20 sanjay Expert
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link comment answered Nov 12 '15 at 15:09 Glenn Terrell New member
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You all are cordially invited on coming friday

link comment answered May 09 at 02:43 Israt Ferdous New member
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Dear diary 

I am bennert today it was a awful day my mother shove  me to go to the Colosseum I had no rights  but to , but go going there were more  trouble … as I  get  there the battle is just about to begin ,the race in the colosseum as the female gladiators came out I was cheering but later I realised nobody was cheering with me  the  female gladiators was wearing.and  had ..she light brown hair..............and stuff As i got home a ,seeing  our lovely, cozy home I soon realize that  I Forgot  every bad thing in life    

link comment answered Jun 14 at 05:21 Lida Bao New member
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it has now my husband

link comment answered Oct 21 at 06:39 SHAMIMA AKTER New member

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