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Students whose needs that have not been met by mainstream compulsory education should seek alternative education settings that have roots in various philosophies and a sense of community.



My instructor said this sentence is too vague and I need to be more exact. Can someone help me because I thought it was good. :(  

asked Sep 19 '12 at 21:49 Lauren New member

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