How to restructure this sentence
According to the AACN the average age of RNs right now is 55 and with retirement alone will create a 30% increase annually in the number of nursing students needed to replace them AACN, 2008).
If you're going to source the statistics at the end, you needn't also source it at the beginning. Also, the "with" should be removed and the second thought should either begin a new sentence, or at very least get a comma before the "and". Also, you need an opening parenthese at the end.
The average age of RNs right now is 55, and retirement will increase the number of nursing students needed to replace them by 30% every year (AACN, 2008).
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