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I was able to pay particular attention to a number of the exhibitions at the United States Holocaust Memorial Museum, including the Wexner Center's anti-genocide display, the children's exhibit, Remember The Children: Daniel's Story on the first floor of the museum, as well as the permanent exhibit The Holocaust which takes up three floors and has an overwhelming amount of belongings from one of the world's most devastating tragedies.
asked Sep 03 '12 at 18:47 Xenia Castell New member

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