Is the writing style okay?

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What better way can we write the matter given below? I am ignorant whether I should ask anything other than grammar here. Any help?

See example:

"Building up trust in any relationship begins with self-confidence firstly. Secondly, honesty. Trust your heart and all that you have in it. It's extremely beneficial to know each other's needs and expectations. It helps in understanding each other to a considerable extent.

 

 

Communications must be exceptionally strong to avoid confusions and frustrations.


Responsiveness is a powerful key to strengthen a relationship further."

edited Aug 09 '12 at 15:44 Sush New member

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