how can i rephrase this sentence?

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according to my english teacher this sentence just seems awkward so i need to rephrase it somehow either changing words or i dont know but this is the sentence.

 

 Alim understood the responsibility of a father within time, and did not abandon his son like Alim was as a child.

asked Jun 26 '12 at 19:11 erica New member

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