I need some help with this paper
There are many parts in the writing process are losing my train of thought, it appears "to be one way, and turn out to be" so awesome.
No offense, but this comes across as "word salad to me," like you have up to 4 diferent sentences stuck together at random.
There seems to be a word missing between your opening clause and "are." "Which" or "that" probably should go there. After thought, you should probably start a new sentence. I am not sure what "so awesome" has to do with that or why you are using quotes.
I am not sure if this is close to what you meant or not:
There are many parts in the writing process which I cannot understand. They appear to be one way, but turn out to be another.
Now if this is a formal paper, you might want to remove the personal pronoun, though this may introduce passive voice:
There are many parts in the writing process which are hard to understand. They appear to be one way, but turn out to be another.
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