Hello community. Please hel me revise the sentence below.

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Therefore, to conclude on the role that pharmacist play in reduction of health disparities in United states, it is essential for them to be in position to provide culturally competent care because they are the ones who play an important role in influencing the patients health status in a direct manner through their direct engagement in various patient treatments as well as through the pharmaceutical care they provide to them.
asked May 24 '12 at 18:39 JOANNE OKOLO New member

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