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these sentences have mistakes and I don't know how I correct they. Also my reference is uncorrect, please anyone can correct it and explain it how to correct it. the Bold words are the mistakes.

 

1)   Also a tool for making cultural integration between different cultures.
       2)  In addition, it is considered as a tool of communication between the peoples of the world.
       3)   Although as Amina’s school arranged for her to join a small and sheltered ‘induction’ class for         some weeks to support her and to help her to understand her new environment” (246).                                             
          In view of the indicators of new economic powers furthermore in view of the strong economic competition.”
        5)  Apart from that such higher strategic benefits with their political and social dimensions.

Reference:
  Mercer, Neil. In addition, Swan, Joan. Learning English development and diversity. The Open University: by Routledge, 1996.

asked May 04 '12 at 10:30 Gina New member

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Incomplete sentence:

 

1)   Also a tool for making cultural integration between different cultures.

 

Either this should be a part of the previous sentence, or it is a dependent clause with most of the sentence missing.  When also is used like that, it signals that what follows is a clause which cannot stand alone.  Clauses can be used as substitutes for parts of speech, like this sentence fragment would make a good predicate.  You could say:

 

It is also a tool for making cultural integration between different cultures.

 

Or:

 

Also, it is a tool for making cultural integration between different cultures.

 

Passive voice:

 2)  In addition, it is considered as a tool of communication between the peoples of the world.

 

You may not need to correct this.  If you know who considers it a tool, you could say that.  You could say:

 

2)  In addition, we consider it as a tool of communication between the peoples of the world.

 

Change "we" above to whoever considers it such a tool.

 

Incomplete sentence:

      3)   Although as Amina’s school arranged for her to join a small and sheltered ‘induction’ class for some weeks to support her and to help her to understand her new environment” (246).                                            

 

Although is usually used as part of a dependent clause, which means a part of the sentence which cannot be used alone.

 

Incomplete sentence:

4)  In view of the indicators of new economic powers furthermore in view of the strong economic competition.”

 

In view of all this, so what?  What is the point of the sentence?  It sounds like the rest is missing and that this is just the starting part of a sentence.

 

Incomplete sentence:

5)  Apart from that such higher strategic benefits with their political and social dimensions.
 

Where is the rest of it? You keep using clauses in place of sentences.  Sentences must have a noun and a verb.  However, you cannot have your main part of the sentences inside clauses.  They only add to the sentence, but do not make a sentence.   Dependent clauses often replace a single part of speech, but they cannot stand alone.

 

 

Bibliography, not a sentence.

  Mercer, Neil. In addition, Swan, Joan. Learning English development and diversity. The Open University: by Routledge, 1996.

 

There is no need to check this with Grammarly, and I don't think Grammarly can successfully test a bibilography.

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