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I am hard working. Among my other strengths are positive attitude, keenness to learn new things, comprehensive problem solving abilities, willingness to learn, flexibility, enthusiasm towards team work and goal oriented.

asked May 03 '12 at 15:31 Rahul Gupta Expert

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I would go with Jeff's changes, but I would either change "keenness" with "willingness", or tweak it to say that you are a fast learner. It says more towards your ABILITY to learn than being WILLING to learn. The is a key difference, it doesn't matter to a potntial employer that you are willing to do it, if you are unable to do it.  I hope that helps!

link comment answered May 03 '12 at 16:08 Tony Proano Expert

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