How to improve it:
I am hard working. Among my other strengths are positive attitude, keenness to learn new things, comprehensive problem solving abilities, willingness to learn, flexibility, enthusiasm towards team work and goal oriented.
I would go with Jeff's changes, but I would either change "keenness" with "willingness", or tweak it to say that you are a fast learner. It says more towards your ABILITY to learn than being WILLING to learn. The is a key difference, it doesn't matter to a potntial employer that you are willing to do it, if you are unable to do it. I hope that helps!
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