Help with a sentence, please.


I am currently writing a short essay but have run into a bump on the road. I cannot find a way to correct this sentence to make it flow better in the essay.

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Something I look forward to experiencing is the opportunity to see the individual children grow and improve in their health.
asked Jun 06 '14 at 03:07 Kimberly Farias New member

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I look forward to the experience of witnessing the growth and improved health of each child. 

link comment answered Jun 10 '14 at 08:21 Nitin Anand New member

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