What is wrong with this sentence ? HELP. I know it is the adjective, but I cannot figure out why ... "The whole structure of the school system does not treat boys very friendly."
Here are two possible alternatives:
The entire school system should be restructured to make an environment more friendly for the boys.
The entire school system could be restructured to create a friendlier environment for the boys.
I like the second sentence better. You can substitute 'could' with 'should', depending upon the rest of your paragraph.
Best of luck!
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