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In my garden, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. Flowers are blooming everywhere. I can smell the fragrance of them. The grass is green. It is as soft as a bed to lay down. Two lovely rabbits are on the grass. They are racing happily. There are some fish swimming joyfully in the pond. I can hear the birds singing sweetly. The butterflies are colourful. They are dancing beautifully. I want to dance with them. Look! This is my dream garden.
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