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In my garden, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. Flowers are blooming everywhere.  I can smell the fragrance of them.  The grass is green.  It is as soft as a bed to lay down.  Two lovely rabbits are on the grass. They are racing happily.  There are some fish swimming joyfully in the pond. I can hear the birds singing sweetly.  The butterflies are colourful. They are dancing beautifully.  I want to dance with them. Look!  This is my dream garden. 

edited May 12 '14 at 14:43 Paula Lui New member

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