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increasing population, and rapid economic growth in recent years, have put a large and increasing stress on the water resources and environment in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam.
asked May 01 '14 at 10:58 thaar alanazi New member

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Increased population and rapid economic growth in recent years put a large amount of stress on water resources and climate in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam.   

 

 

Try something like this.

link comment answered May 01 '14 at 13:24 Daisy Mendoza New member

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