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I am from China, a country with vast wetland around Tropic of Cancer, where is the paradise of mosquitoes and hotbed of malaria. 


Thank you all very much.

asked May 01 '14 at 03:42 AQ New member

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China is a country with vast wetland arounf the Tropic of Cancer, home to misquitoes and a hotbed of malaria. 


Try to see if this is any help.  It needs some work, becasue I was confused by the sentence. 

link answered May 01 '14 at 13:36 Daisy Mendoza New member

Thank you very much Daisy. It helps. How could I include the information that I am from China in the sentence?

AQMay 01 '14 at 15:05

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