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bankruptcy is a crime and his father does not want to servr a jail term so they migrate to the united state and settled in queens New York.

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In her country South Korean, bankruptcy is a crime and his father doesn't want to serve a jail term so they migrate to the United States and settled in queens New York.
asked Apr 17 '14 at 15:33 Salieu jalloh New member

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In her country, South Korean, bankruptcy is a crime, and his father did not want to serve a jail term. So they immigrated to the United States and settled in Queens New York. I have changed the tense to sound better. 

link comment edited Apr 17 '14 at 16:23 Sanjay Expert

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