What's wrong with this sentence?
What is wrong with the following sentence: "Bob is a curious person, collecting things." My instinct tells me that the correct version of this sentence would be "Bob is a curious person who collects things" but I'm not sure a) if I'm correct or b) what, technically, makes the first version incorrect. Can anyone help?
my roommate said her philosophy class was hard, and the one i'm in is hard, too. All philosophy classes must be hard. A) philosophy isn't hard. B) there was not enough evidence to support that conclusion. C) THE EVIDENCE IS INVALID. d) NOTHING
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