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Hi Peter;

 

As discussed, we agreed that you would pay me $150.00 on every Tuesday with regard to the spinning classes that I am running at your health club, however, I have not received the payment yet, the reason that I am bringing it up to your attention is that I would like to have a piece of mind whilst I am preparing for the indoor cycling session and I do not feel comfortable teaching without receiving the payment, by the end of hte day, its your businness and income

 

I would appreciate, if you could take my message into consideration

 

Thank you for your time

 

Rayan

Peter is the club manager asked Apr 15 '12 at 18:48 RAYAN New member

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