How can I make this sentence accurate?
Involving the family in the students' progress in the subject area can show the student how supportive everyone involved in his/her educational path are.
I must admit that I struggled a bit with this sentence, as I understand the importance of what you are trying to say. Following are two choices; I think that I like the second one the best. I hope this will be helpful to you!
1) The support of the student's family members will demonstrate the importance of his/her educational choices.
2) Family involvement is integral to the student's progress, as he/she will reap the benefits of their continual support.
All my best,
|link comment||answered Feb 07 '14 at 22:52 Karen OKeefe Contributor|
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