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The foods and beverages initially were high in fats and calories, so PepsiCo’s leaders formed a team that focuses on healthier measures to generate products for consumers who desire to live a healthier lifestyle.

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The foods and beverages initially were high in fats and calories, so PepsiCo's leaders formed a team that focuses on healthier measures to generate products for consumers who desire to live a healthier lifestyle.
asked Apr 06 '12 at 13:20 Brenda Washington New member

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