"I believe the stress management skills and many otherr experiences that I accumulated through work will be a great asset for my future research and work."
Grammarly check indicated it is a wordy sentence. I have difficulty to edit it. Thank you for your help.
Hmmmmmm.... try some fancy punctuation!
"I believe that stress management skills, among other learning experiences that I have been exposed to through my work, will be a great asset for my future research projects and employments."
Try putting that in and see if it still says it is wordy--note that I even added some more wordiness!
Note 1: I keep sentences like this as close to the original as possible to assist people in seeing their errors.
Note 2: I do think that this sentence is too wordy and self-aggrandizing for such mundane skills as you are listing within it.
Note 3: HEYO!
|link||edited Jan 17 '14 at 14:25 Aaron Prejean Expert|
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