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The proposal includes "growing, buying, and consuming by adults ages 21 and older" .
asked Jan 12 '14 at 20:11 Tonya McKinney New member

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The proposal includes growth, buying and consumption by adults aged twenty one and above.

link comment answered Jan 13 '14 at 03:37 Rahul Gupta Expert

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