please let me know if the following phrase is correct ot nor for scientific paper?
Presently, the net length at each deployment is as long as 8250 m for large dhow. This single piece of net is produced by a link of 110 panels together, each measuring 75 m long
- "Presently" is dodgy, unless you are about to contrast the current state with a past or future state in the next sentence.
- "is as long as" is ponderous and unnecessary. Just "is" will do.
- "by a link of" should be "by linking"
- There should be a period at the end.
- Spell out "meters".
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