please let me know if the following phrase is correct ot nor for scientific paper?


Presently, the net length at each deployment is as long as 8250 m for large dhow. This single piece of net is produced by a link of 110 panels together, each measuring 75 m long

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- "Presently" is dodgy, unless you are about to contrast the current state with a past or future state in the next sentence.

- "is as long as" is ponderous and unnecessary.  Just "is" will do.

-  "by a link of" should be "by linking"

-  There should be a period at the end.

-  Spell out "meters".

link comment answered Sep 22 '16 at 00:31 Christine Contributor

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