...incomplete comparisons in these sentences in my novel:
Ann asked, "Why are you so quiet? You have not even eaten your food. What's wrong?"
She could not even describe to herself, what she was feeling, much less to anyone else.
...passive voice in thse sentences:
She wondered, "Do these people not realize, that it is 1972?"
The reason I had trouble sleeping was because I was so thrilled.
The camp is named for the river.
Hope was accustomed to seeing guys and gals swimming in the same pool.
Hope was startled back to reality, when Ann plopped down next to her.
Hope noticed that Bible study classes were segregated just as swimming groups were segregated.
BNKBNKBNKBNK! "That alarm sound is so weird.
Hero of the day
Person asked the most questions.