Does this "grabber" sentence make sense??


Does this make sense? I'm starting a paper on Poe and why he is relevent to American literature. I wanted a good grabber sentence but I keep re-reading it and I'm not sure if my proffesor would appreciate me trying to connect this metaphor to poe's literature. 


If a great script can create a movie with the capacity to babysit a kid, and a great record can create peace in a mind filled with distress, than a great short story can create a most weary a mind transform into a powerful hero on cue.

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