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Traditionally Marketing was limited to pure "demand generation".
asked Dec 06 '13 at 09:02 Jigesh Shah New member

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Marketing  limits its own ability to increase revenue because the "demand generation" relies a lot on technology. Traditional companies have outdated techniqes, which reduces their abiilty to properly educate customer service professionals. The result is to outsource jobs to people who can walk the cunsumer through any problem for less money.

link comment edited Dec 06 '13 at 09:49 Rebecca Frye New member

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