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 My decision to pursue a career in nursing came from my personal experience and volunteer experience. My love for nursing and giving care started at a very young age.  When I was 10 years of age, I helped my parent take care of my grandfather who had been suffering from rectal prolapse disease, as well as some other disease that was unknown because of the lock of  money to go to the hospital. I knew the disease was incurable but I did all I can to help my grandfather  go through his daily problem. From that experience My love of giving care and curing people became more stronger  because i didn't want to see any other person go through these type of problems without proper treatment and care . From  that time I have dreamed to become a qualified, experience and a very competent nurse. I believe that compassion, patience and care have positive impact on patient's physical and psychological state. In my view, a productive nurse is the one who give care, communicate with a patient, establish trust and act as curer of both body and mind.

asked Mar 29 '12 at 16:12 nana New member

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