Sentence Structure problem
I dont know if the sentence below is a Comma Splice, Run-on, Dangling Modifier or a Misplaced Modifier?How to correct it?
Lines for Star Wars tickets ran around the block some people had even set up tents.
Like others are saying, the biggest problem is a run-on sentence. If you want to keep it as one, you might say:
Since the line for Star Wars tickets ran around the block, some had to set up tents.
Or shorter and no punctuation:
The line for Star Wars tickets was so long that some had to set up tents.
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