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I'm writing a critical review of "ghetto" , English is not really my first language so its hard to know if what i wrote can be understood. please help me :)



"Because the population of visible minorities are immensely high in cities, there is a tendency that different ethnicities bound to compete for jobs and opportunity. Others succeed well while others are not so fortunate and in this sense drive them to seek for low-cost houses or areas that fits in their budget.

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