I want to know if my sentence makes sense.

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She waved her hair at me.

I mean by the sentence that she used her hand to sway her hair in my direction but I don't know if the sentence makes sense like this.

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I think it makes sense, but wave may give the impression that she held it and waved it back and forth.

 

Based on your description "flicked" might be a better verb.

 

If you feel like going Don Juan;

"She flicked her hair coquettishly in my direction."

link answered Nov 08 '13 at 01:47 Aaron Prejean Expert

Thanks a lot

user22Nov 09 '13 at 09:23

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It makes sense because shes giving a direction when swaying her hair.

link comment answered Jan 20 at 21:26 Vanessa Sanchez New member
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link comment answered Jun 12 at 12:36 dinesh New member

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