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n conclusion, encouraging infant male circumcision it is not a prudent public health intervention in response to the increased rates of heterosexually transmitted HIV in Australia where evidence of its protective effect is limited and homosexually transmitted HIV accounts for the majority of incidence and prevalent rates.

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In conclusion, encouraging infant male circumcision it is not a prudent public health intervention in response to the increased rates of heterosexually transmitted HIV in Australia where evidence of its protective effect is limited and homosexually transmitted HIV accounts for the majority of incidence and prevalent rates.
asked Mar 22 '12 at 20:09 Noela Chicuecue New member

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