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When compared to other cities in Texas and to cities nationwide, the patients in McAllen received more expensive tests, procedures, treatments and surgeries while in other hospitals, the care was much better and cost was much lower.
asked Oct 16 '13 at 15:42 Durline Manhertz New member

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