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Once one gets passed their perceptions and looks at the score as raw data and a learning tool.

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Once one gets passed their perceptions and looks at the score as raw data and a learning tool.
asked Mar 19 '12 at 02:30 Jill Thurow New member

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How about "Getting past one's perceptions and looking at the score as raw data, it becomes a learning tool."

link comment answered Mar 24 '12 at 13:17 Steven List Contributor

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