Feedback on structure/wording of closing sentence.
Below is my closing sentence for an article I am working on. As of now, it is one long sentence. But I feel as though its length is somewhat annoying to a reader. I would love to receive feedback and suggestions on how to improve my closing sentence. I want it to be impactful, yet not overly complicated.
We must prioritize the limited resources in public education and focus our efforts toward preparing our kids to become independent thinkers necessary for a democracy, rather than becoming subjects of seemingly arbitrary policies touted by school officials.
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