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Their behaviors and attitudes are unacceptable, therefore they need to change.  

asked Aug 29 '13 at 13:34 brad charleson New member

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The three ways to join independent clauses:


(1) comma + coordinating conjunction

...are unacceptable, so they need...


(2) semicolon + conjunctive adverb + comma

...are unacceptable; therefore, they need...


(3) semicolon

...are unacceptable; they need...


You tried to commingle (1) and (2).

link comment answered Aug 31 '13 at 15:39 Aaron Prejean Expert

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