Is this sentence correct?


The dominant candidate conceded his defeat after the final result of election had revealed. Is the word ''concede'' being used correctly in this sentence? or Should I revise it as the below example?


''The dominant candidate conceded after the result had shown on the screen. 


Thanks in advance!

asked Aug 14 '13 at 04:05 ducdang123 Contributor

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