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asked Feb 20 '12 at 01:48 luk Riek New member

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Hello Luk, Your paragraph is very confused so it's too difficult to work out what you're trying to say. Try to break it up into shorter sentences and repost it.

link comment answered Feb 21 '12 at 00:04 Siân Harris Expert

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