Hey everyone! Here is a sentence from a paper I am writing. When I review it in Grammarly it says it's too wordy. And I actually agree, but I cannot figure out how else to write the sentence. I like the listing that I have currently, but I am wondering if I should chop it up into smaller sentences...? If so, how? Suggestions? Thank you. 


There are eight distinct qualities of a genius: they have enriched home environments during childhood, they live in diverse locales during childhood, they have a reversal of family fortune, they are self-educated, they have tendencies to be independent, autonomous, or rebellious, they are the later-born children in a family, they are emotionally and psychology unstable, and are multicultural and bilingual.

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