avoiding passive voice


I am struggling with passive voice. For example, the following sentence uses passive voice and I am unsure how to rewrite it.

See example:

Evaluation is critical to determine if the new system is utilized as intended and provide the outcomes as projected through rigorous evidence (O'Carroll et al., 2003).
asked Oct 29 '11 at 17:28 sherry sandreth New member

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