Is this right?


The website said to consider putting a comma after "here". Is the way i have it written correct?

See example:

Here I was, tears streaming down my face, screaming, begging them to stop, pleading them to let me go.
asked Oct 26 '11 at 19:19 Sara New member

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You're spot on, Sara. 


You could put a comma after "here" in some cases:


"Here, I was a stranger."


But in your sentence, all your commas are correctly placed.

link comment answered Oct 27 '11 at 07:15 Agreeonpurpose Contributor

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